2016银川一中一模英语试题及答案(5)

Sometimes you are so proud of yourself that you do not want your parents to say “yes” to what you do. All you want is   68  （leave） alone and do what you like. It is natural enough, after  69  （be）a child for so many years, when you were completely under your parents’ control.
If you plan to control your life, you’d better win your parents. If your parents see that you have  70   high sense of responsibility, they will give you the right to do what you want to do.
第四部分  写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节  短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find them addicting to their phones, completely ignoring others.
This is really a common phenomena in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involved in phones fail to communicate well with these around them.
As far as I am concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help their work and study. Meanwhile, care much about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.
笫二节  书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是银川一中的李华，你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Martin想来中国旅游，你向他推荐了西安市，请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.自我介绍；
2.推荐理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1. 字数不少于100；
2. 适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Martin,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.___________

Yours,
Li Hua

银川一中2016届高三第一次模拟英语试卷答案
听力理解：1-5 BACCB    6-10AABCB    11-15ACBAB    16-20 CCABC
阅读理解：21-23 CDB    24-27 CADB    28-31 C BA C   32-35 B DCB
篇章结构：36-40 FCEAG
完形填空：41-45 CDCAB   46-50 CBADC    51-55 DABCB      56-60 DBDCA
语法填空：
61 Uncomfortable  62 that  63 it   64  more;  65 choices;    66 from;    
67 their;   68 to be left; 69 being ； 70 a
短文改错：
As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find them addicting to their phones, completely ignoring others.
This is really a common phenomena in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involved in phones fail to communicate well with these around them.
As far as I am concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help their work and study. Meanwhile, care much about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.
去掉to； addicting改为addicted； phenomena改为phenomenon； why改为that；kept改为keep； Therefore 改为However； are改为is； these改为those； 在help和their work之间加with； much改为more。
书面表达：
Dear Martin,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xian.
I’m Li hua, a student from Yinchuan No.1 Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to traveling in China, Xian is a popular tourist destination. First of all, Xian is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself. Second, people in Xian are friendly, kind, and willing to help others, which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Third, you can have a chance to experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Xian. In addition, I’d like to serve as your guide if you come.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua